Assignment for lesson #1: Create a complete story in 55 words. Not 54, not 56 – but 55.

Jerry’s Lucky Day by Tara Smith (Title does not count towards word count)

Jerry was bothered by cock sucking fantasies. He was married but he couldn’t stop thinking about it. One day he came home early and found his wife fucking another man. The couple was startled but Jerry said it’s okay as long as he could suck her lover’s cock. They agreed and lived happily ever after.

I’m taking a creative writing course on Udemy. I have to do daily writing using provided prompts. The sentence in brackets is the prompt and the rest is what I was inspired to write. BTW, This is a first draft, very little editing, stream of writing:

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[She approached the unfamiliar door and nervously took the key from her pocket. She took a deep breath, unlocked the door, paused, then opened it. To her horror she saw] her husband on his knees, wearing a pair of her pink panties, sucking off the valet that had parked their car earlier that evening.

It was more than clear what he was doing. There was no way he could have back-stepped this. The valet’s cock was very large and her husband’s lips were clearly wrapped around it. “Oh my god!” Rebecca gasped, placing her hand over her mouth. And then oh my god that much more loud so that her husband and the valet stopped and finally noticed her.

Her husband’s eyes were wide as he stared at her, mortified being exposed; however, the valet – a young strapping man with broad shoulders and biceps, obviously didn’t care as he grabbed hold of her husbands head and began to fuck his face even more. Hammering faster and deeper than when he had no idea he was being watched. Rebecca stood there, watching unable to move – she had been initially furious – anyone would of been, walking in on such a sight on what was suppose to be a romantic anniversary celebration; but that began to fade as she focused more on the handsome valet who was now smiling at her, fucking her husband hard and smiling.

Rebecca smiled back. A wide and bright smile that said keep going – don’t mind me while I watch my husband get fucked, like a fagboi should, with a very large and hard cock. She liked what she saw – of course it was shocking but that’s what made it so delicious. Rebecca was bored with her sex life, her husband had not been paying much attention to her and she couldn’t understand why – she was always getting hit on – but now it made perfect sense. Her husband wanted to be the one taking the dick; not giving it. If only he had told me, she mused.

“Keep fucking that bitch husband of mine!” Rebecca moaned, commanding the young man fucking her husband “And when you are done fucking him… YOU ARE GOING TO FUCK ME!”